Welcome to a special “Vacation Edition” of Ned’s Nickel’s Worth on Writing, which is just like any other edition of my NWOW, except that I’m holding a margarita in one hand. Sadly, this has no effect on my typing speed whatsoever. As I mentioned last week, I am spending part of my vacation sifting through two years of NWOW writing advice and organizing it into an eBook. And when I say “part of my vacation,” I mean the part that doesn’t include sleeping late, drinking margaritas, taking naps, having more margaritas and then falling asleep. But I promise: between 2:30 and 2:45 p.m. each day, I am diligently working on what I’m hoping will be a writer’s survival guide that offers writing insights as well as inspiration.
Then again, that could be the tequila talking.
In the meantime, I’ve hand-picked a couple of past NWOWs for the next two Fridays while I work on the book, which I plan to finish before my vacation ends next weekend. Or after I wake up from my next nap, whichever comes first…
Do You Feel a Draft? It’s Time To Revise Your Manuscript
Whether writing a 500-word essay or 400-paged manuscript, there comes that satisfying moment when you hit the final keystroke. The sound echoes, in slow motion, reverberating through your body and outward, catching anyone within a three-mile radius in its ripple effect.
Outside your window, traffic comes to a stop. Drivers and pedestrians join together, taking time from their day to cheer, applauding so loud and hard their hands turn pink.
And wait — is that a tear I see glistening in the eye of the Fed-Ex driver?
It’s embarrassing, really.
But who can blame them?
Your own brilliance is looking back at you from the monitor! How clever you are!
Especially that line about how being a parent is like training donkeys, and there are thymes when your children just need a swift kick in the asss…
Hold the phone.
…And what is THAT…?
This brings us to the next moment following that final keystroke, when the applause subsides, and you suddenly notice that the cleverness looking back at you from your screen is spelled “cleaverness.”
Is that a draft you feel on your exposed backside?
Yes, it is.
And, depending on the size of your manuscript and how much time you have — and whether you’ve gotten up and closed the window — it should only be the first of three drafts you’ll need to complete before submitting your piece for publication.
Which isn’t to say you can’t do more than three. In fact, when it comes to book manuscripts, expect at least three drafts before you can, once and for all, be asked to change your story from third-person to first-person in order to add a sense of immediacy.
At which point you will, with total immediacy, seriously consider a job in public sanitation.
But let’s suppose the head of public works tells you, in no uncertain terms, that things are backed up in the sanitation department. And let’s suppose you manage to keep a straight face long enough to return to your computer and continue pursuing a writing career, even though you can’t shake the feeling that you are now on a “watch list” for suspicious flushers.
Then it’s time to start the next draft of your manuscript.
As I’ve mentioned before, in addition to being a columnist, I’m also a firefighter. When you get down to it, putting out a structure fire is also a three-draft process:
I’ve adopted these firefighting terms for the three phases of my writing and editing routine. Not only because I think they accurately describe each phase, but also because they sound way cooler than:
Draft (yawwwn) …
See what I mean?
The Initial Attack phase is exactly what it sounds like. You have assembled what you need, know your plan of action, and are on-scene with your nozzle wide open, flooding the page with your ideas in a steady stream without interruption.
Except now I have to use the rest room…
Thanks for waiting.
The Initial Attack is when you don’t worry about spelling, punctuation or other grammatical concerns that will slow down your progress in getting thoughts and ideas on the page.
The Initial Attack is what writers — and firefighters — live for.
Next comes the not-so-fun, but equally important, phase of the draft process: Overhaul.
This is when you take a deep breath and look around to see what the fire has done, what dangers remain, and take care of anything that could flare up again later.
As a writer, the same rules apply. Take a look at your pages as if they’re rooms in a house. And if your house has 400 rooms, the IRS is looking forward to your manuscript.
Go through each page, line by line, and look for obvious errors — typos, misspelling, run-on sentences, improper tense changes, etc. As you do, keep a red pen handy to write notes as you go. I often get additional ideas, or think of better phrasing, as I go through this process. Write them down and refer to them by page and paragraph so, when you go back, you can refer to them easily.
Once you’ve made your grammar corrections and implemented your revisions, take a break and clear your head.
On a fire scene, it’s easy to get tunnel vision after a while. Especially if you’re extinguishing a car fire inside an actual tunnel.
The same thing can happen during the draft process as a writer. So give yourself 30 minutes or so to get a fresh set of eyes before beginning the final phase: Clean-up.
At this point, you’ve gone through everything twice, corrected the grammatical “dangers” you discovered during Overhaul, and have made revisions to your manuscript that improve upon the original draft.
Clean-up is that final walk-through you give before telling residents — or publishers — “Hey, everything has been done to make sure you won’t get burned.”
Read through this draft out loud. If you can arrange to have it read back to you by someone else, such as Ben Kingsley, even better. Hearing your words read by someone else can reveal awkward phrasing your mind skips over because IT knows what you’re trying to say; someone else may not.
Regardless, read through it twice: once aloud and once to yourself. If you don’t find any “hot” spots, it’s time to clear the scene and secure your manuscript for publication.
If not, another draft may be in order.
Lastly, If you get frustrated and try flushing your manuscript down the commode, remember:
Someone from public sanitation is probably watching.
(Ned Hickson is a syndicated columnist with News Media Corporation. His first book, Humor at the Speed of Life, is available from Port Hole Publications, Amazon.com or Barnes & Noble.)
20 thoughts on “Writing tips that will help you jump off the deep end”
Always with the good advice, Ned…
And always appreciated, Red.
I’m already exhausted.
Sounds like time for a nap.
Very amusing, and from what I’ve heard from friends very true.
More literary wisdom from the most unlikely of sources. Thanks for enlightening us once more, Yutz.
It’s the least I can do. Or most. I’m not sure which.
Hmm, I don’t suppose we can just skip back to the part about margaritas?
I tend to do a lot of skipping the more margaritas I have…
I’ll be looking forward to this gem of wisdom. I’ve met a lot of people from the writing world recently and I’m keen to finish my WIP. Every little bit of NWOW will help immensely!!
And I’m keen on doing anything to help you finish your WIP, Susan 😉
Thanks, Ned. Now I know if I can track down Ben Kingsley I’ll be write. Easy, peasy …
I would’ve said Morgan Freeman, but that would’ve been silly.
I like the three draft idea. But…I’m a little OCD and the initial attack phase has me flummoxed. It’s too hard to ignore punctuation, spelling, grammar. It’s just too hard. And it’s so scary to just…just…type. Enjoy your vacation. Your #2 fan in Florida with attack issues, Lucy.
Lucy, I can’t even stand to use improper grammar in my texts, so…yeah, I get it 😉
Thanks for the kind wishes, Lucy!
Awww…the bare butt has such a nostalgic feel. I think this column might have been one of the first of yours that I read. It’s exactly why your book will be relevant and popular. Good writing advice never goes out of style and reading this for the second time was even better than the first (yes, Margaritas help your readers, too). I’m reading Ann Lamott (Bird by Bird) for the second time and that’s helpful, too. I find that it’s easy to write blog posts and just plain scary to attack anything bigger than that.
I guess it’s time to drop the drawers, fill up the glass and get this manuscript party started…as soon as I figure out what I want my story to be.
Don’t wait up!
(Hope you’re having a great vacation!)
Weird! My wife said the same thing about MY bare butt this morning!
I’m so glad the repeat was worth the re-read, Michelle. I realize many of my NWOWs in the book will be repeats to people, but sometimes having a second read through strikes a different chord, depending on what we’ve learned since the first time, or how many margaritas we’ve had.
Enjoy the creative process of storytelling as you piece together your manuscript. Trust your instincts, listen to your characters and set realistic goals. With your drinking, I mean… 😉
(And I’m always happy to help if you need a sounding board. Or bar tab.)
Thanks for the advice, Ned, it was very cleaver.
I try to stay sharp.